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2015年5月15日 星期五

A unforgettable experience

      Last Friday, I went to the nearby supermarket to do some shopping for my mother. it was a unforgettable experience. 

        when i was getting milk from the fridge in the supermarket, i saw a girl walking suspiciously towards the column if sales. i was curious so i went after her. i was shocked to see her hiding some snacks in her ruck-back. i immediately shouted, "help! A thief t", she tried to run away and i tried to chase after her. when she ran near to entrance of the supermarket, i used all my might to pull the cart. 

        with a loud "bang" the girl tripped over, the milk spilled all over her and the ground was fill with biscuits. the cart broke into pieces and rolled over her. 

        the cops came and sent her to the hospital. i was in major trouble, i have to pay for the things that i have broke. 

2014年10月24日 星期五

A happy hiking



美麗的公園



我最喜歡的公園是香港公園,每個春節,我都會去那兒遊玩,因為那時萬物復蘇,生機勃勃的。

一進到公園,首先映入眼簾的是一個宏偉華麗的噴泉。看到它我的腳像被粘在了地上,眼睛在被黏住了,動不了。不知是不是因為它的宏偉和美麗呢。接著,我都會坐在一邊看流水的宏偉和聽它悅耳的響聲,它像一位詩人,用溫和的語氣向你講述那些故事和傳說。它很像幫你舒緩壓力呢!

沿著彎彎曲曲的小路向前走,我就看到色彩繽紛的花叢,每次我都會陶醉在花海裏,還要嗅一嗅花的清香才願走呢。

不遠的前方,就是池塘了,水面時不時湧動著波紋。那是因為池中有一些「小精靈」,當我看見裏面的金魚和烏龜,我都會覺得那個池塘生機勃勃,令人感到大自然的美好。

我十分喜歡香港公園,希望這個公園不會被人破壞,因為只要你細心地觀察公園裏的每個地方,到處都充滿生機呢。

2014年7月31日 星期四

Dear Norman - Reading program


Since there no Norman;s response in the story, i would like to invite my son try to found out Norman feeling through the letter from his family, teacher, friends.

This is the Draft:


Day 1 writing:

No place like Home

Every one has a home, but i think my home is better than others, Let me introduce my family.

My home is like a safari park! My brother us a buffalo, he us very strong and when he gets angry, he is unstopable. My dad is a lion, he eats a lot, sleeps a lot, enjoy nit doing thing a lot, and the most horrible thing is that he shouts at anyone when his angry. My mum, she is like a safari guide and show me life, time, stuff like that. At last my grandparents, I think my grandma is a chicken, why? It is because she is too stingy to give someone money. Oh! you must be asking about my grandpa, right? He is my favorite character in the family. he is like a friend of mine he cares about me a lot, you should be jealous about me ! if your aren't, you should be ashamed. 


Day 2 writing

Good points (Merit) and bad point (Demerit) of my family: 
GoodBad
1.        My family is quit rich
2.        My younger bother is too stupid, I can play trick on him.
3.        My family members are big eaters, every time we go on a buffet, waiters were often amazed and it made the buffet cheaper
1.        My mum is very bad at cooking
2.        My family talks a lot.
3.        Because we eat a lot. Grocery shopping is very hard because we have to carry all our food home.



What if you need to stay on your backyard tree house for certain things for different use. 
For survival, I am going to bring: 
1.        Weapon for example: pen knives, torch, fire(lighters), crakets , mask, BB guns. Etc 
2.        Matches for fire 
3.        Food and water 
4.        Blankets to keep warm 
5.        Ipad, wifi to stay away from boring 

For learning: 
1.        Books, dictionary 
2.        Pens, or pencils, eraser and etc 


Time table
11:00 pm – 9:30amSleeping
9:00 am – 9:30amBreakfast (the food that I have brought)
9:30am – 12:00pmPlay video games
12:00 – 1:00Lunch
1:pm – 4:00Reading , studying, checking is there any letter from daddy and mum
4:00 – 7:00Playing video game
7:00 – 8:00Dinner
8:00 – 9:00Playing video game

Notes: 
Food and water that I have brought 
Electricity – no problem, I can use long electric wires and plug into socket. 

If living in outdoor, danger is everywhere. How could I survive? If there is a zombie upocalypse: 
First always wear a mask because the smell of rotten flesh. 
Second always keep a weapon near you; the suitable weapon in this case is bb guns. 
Third, wear a helmet before they eat your brain. 

If there are bugs 
Using bug spray. 
Also bring some insect repellent. 
See a spider use a stick let it climb on it, and transport tit to a suitable place. 
If you see a centipede or scorpions don’t catch it, use your bug spray. 
If your tree house is on fire, just ring for your lives. 
If you con’t escape, jump down. 

If you need to go the toilet. 
There is no toilet in the wild. Cut a small hole (16 inches * 16 inches) around tree house. Pee on it. 

If you find a snake, you need to remember. 
First identify the snakes. Is it venomous? 
People often get the milk snake and coral snake 

Red touches yellow nit a good fellow, 
Read touches black, a friend of jack 

Look at the eyes 


Use a long stick (over one meter ) and push it on the back if the neck. 

Look for book about snake, look for picture of the snake, and venomous information about it, (venomous or not), then you can easily identify with snake you have seen, run, or catch the snake. You can find garter snake in your backyard often. 

If you see a non-venomous snake, you have to identify it why? Because it might be a 20 feet python and came for lunch! 
If you are cure, kit I. 

If you are kind, call for help. You can get a piece of meat or annoying rat neat your tree house when it get distracted, use a container with a lit. call for help or call a reptile rescue center. 














2014年7月13日 星期日

A Day's work - Writing

The story of A day’s work is about Francisco and his Abuelo went to work one day. Francisco said his grandfather is a fine gardener but he isn’t. They pulled the chickweed and let the weeds behinds. They have to do the job again. They worked on the next day.

        From the story, I learnt that the author wrote “A day’s work” to teach me not to lie. It is because Francisco made lie for earning 60 dollars and then his family could have extra food. But it doesn’t work as they made a mistake. They left the weeds, and took out the plant. Also, Ben known that they were not fine gardeners and who tell a lie. Francisco’s grandfather fold him no to lie again. And told Ben hat they could came again to fix it. Therefore, Ben said that “the important things your grandfather knows already.” Ben said that because Francisco’s grandfather known to be honest and humble.





2014年7月1日 星期二

Caving - Writing


             I have an old teacher who lives in New Zealand, she told me when she was young, she taught in a school. Every year they go on a trip to a cave. She often led the way to the students. She was amazed by the stalactite and stalagmites. One time she fell in a sump because it was too dark. You would think of a cave is very scary because there might be monster inside. However, there were beauties inside; also a cave is actually a treasure because millions of year age, the rain started to eat away the line stone.
Millions of years later the rain drilled it way through the line stone, the stalactites and stalagmites are treasure too. We mustn't break them as it will never grow back again. And it takes a hundred years for it to grow just two centimeters. My teacher also told me she found some minerals in the cave like crystals. If you are lucky enough you may find some fossils, although my teacher haven’t seen one, I saw people went into many caves which animals have lived in before, the found fascinating bones, there are many things to explore in a cave waiting for you to discover, join a caving team and be an explorer.











2014年6月29日 星期日

Dormant volcano adventure

After reading On Dangerous ground, using vocabularies that learn form this essay to write a story.

       
        
           One day, my best friend Justin and I went to a dormant volcano on an island. We went to the bottom of the volcano then some of blistering ash coming down, we ran quickly to the dock to take the boat that took us there. On the way, we saw an idiot rush to the ashes and yell “I love ashes”, then we told him to help us say hello to Satan, then he went out of sight.
We got on the boat; I and Justin rowed as hard as we could. After we rowed the boat to a safe place where distance away from the island. I dictated Justin’s observations. At dust we made our ten mile trip back to Hong Kong. After that, we gave our observation to CY Leung, he was very proud of us and gave us nine hundred ninety-nine trillion, nine-hundred and ninety-nine billion dollars and ninety cents. How lucky we are. After we went home with truck full of money, we watched the news about the volcano eruption. We were glad to escape and got a lot of money.

        Ten years later, I took a ship to that island again, it has become a famous visitor’s sight and now the island is got a name called “the Grave of Idiots Island”. I saw a mosaic tile from a cottage which has been destroyed by the eruption, how lucky I am too escape!








2013年8月5日 星期一

Jurassic Garage


Yesterday, I went to Jurassic Garage (JG) to see reptiles.



When I arrived, I was very excited. The show started and the first animal to see was tarantulas. At first I was scared, but the other kids loved it, so I tried to hold a tarantula in the palm of my hand. I found out tarantulas’ legs tickles. The second group of animals were snakes. They are my favorite animals, but I had never touched them before, so I was both excited and nervous. .When I touched one, I was shocked at how friendly the snake was.It was amazing, I saw a few different types of snakes but forgot the names already. One thing I know however, is "SNAKES ARE AMAZING". The third set of animals were tortoises. I fed them with lettuce. They were slow eaters, so I needed to be patient with them. It is because they enjoy eating slowly. And then the JG staff took a bunny to help finish the lettuce. The fourth type of animal were new born rat snakes; they were so cute. It surprised me that the length of the snakes is just as long as the span of my hand. They laid on my two palms comfortably .The fifth animal wasn't friendly, it was the alligator snapping turtle. The staff explained it's living habitat. They could stay in one place for long time ,they will open their mouth and there is a lure which is red line like a worm to attract fish. when a fish comes too close , the turtle can easily snap it. I have seen many animals, but my favorite one is taking pictures with a Burmese python. .It was such a big snake, it was 3 meters tall.
  When the show was over, I wanted to keep a snake. In my entire life I have been asking my parents to buy me a snake for a pet, but they just say "NO NO no no no no no no......" I wish they will change their minds someday.



2013年6月28日 星期五

Dino Likes Garfield



Miss Nancy is the dog and I am Garfield. I will kick her out of Hong Kong Park. It is because she need me to act a dog in a drama. Then I reply her: "I have no responsible for this and I haven't think of the performing this !"

2013年4月8日 星期一

長洲一日遊 (寫作訓練)







離島區是十八個行政區域中佔地最多,人口最少的,那裏民風淳樸、環境優美,被稱為香港的「後花園」。而今日我們就去了其中一個島嶼──長洲

        今天我們和YoYo一家相約在第一城巴士站一起去港外線碼頭乘船去長洲,我們在路途上都十分興奮。我們一邊觀看風景,一邊說笑,三十分鐘的船程眨眼就過去了。我們到了長洲碼頭,看到許多平房和村屋,這裏沒有高樓大廈、沒有汽車,只有單車,這給我一種簡樸的感覺。

        我們首先去東灣海灘,這裏水清沙幼。我們迫不及待地衝到在沙灘挖洞和砌沙城堡,之後我竟然捉到一隻蝦蟆一尾小魚,所以YoYo也拿著桶子到海邊撈魚,她媽媽笑她真是守株待兔。到了中午,我們就去了食海鮮,而老闆娘因心情好,所以送了一碟菜給我們。吃過中午飯,我們就租單車去張保仔洞。我們踏到中途已經汗流浹背,但我們最後到達山腳。下車後,穿過幽深的樹林和攀過別出心裁的遠足徑才到洞口。

        到了洞口,都有不少的遊人慕名而來參觀,在排隊的時候,我懐著緊張心情準備入山洞。到山洞口時,才知要爬下一條窄窄陡陡的扶手梯,我初時想放棄離開,但我鼓起勇氣和信心就爬下了山洞,爬到底時,山洞內漆黑一片,幸好我們帶備電筒,那裏原來很窄的,我們要很小心。我看到了很多東西,例如骷髗頭和雜物等。在出山洞前,我看到一個金幣,我馬上拾起來否則錯失良機,原來這是一個1995年一元。在之前我曾對YoYo說:「我一定要找到寶藏!」所以一出山洞口我就告訴YoYo:「我找到一元」。YoYo 非常妒嫉說:「下次我行先,那麼我就可以找到寶藏!」YoYo媽媽說:「妳已經有兩個寶藏──第一是勇氣,第二是成功!」

        為了慶祝我們的成功,我們去了食火焰雪山雪糕。我們都是第一次吃的,所以我們吃得津津有味。

        時間過得很快,到了黃昏,我們得要走,我們依依不捨地離開長洲。今天我們玩得又開心又累,真是難忘的一天。